pokemon metal Rush

Storyline!!!!!
One day you wake up and you see a beldum floating beside your window. You looked at the beldum and then the beldum some how teleported into your very room. You started to jump the beldum jumped XD. Than after that day you became close personal friends. On your tenth birthday beldum had a present for you it evolved into a metang! You were so happy that day. The day after your birthday you went on your pokemon journey to become pokemon master!!!!!! oak gives you a tailow and a totidile to start your journey. Metang followed you and metang joined your team. One very rainy day Team rocket ambushed you and your totidile and stole your totidile! You sent metang to go after it but team rocket got away. You found out Team rocket wants to steal your metang! Will they be successful? Or will you have the guts to take them down! base on a true story XD



Features
Diamond and pearl Pokemon
New rivals
Jeff and mike (team rocket)
Harder elite four and Gym leaders
New evil team *harder than team rocket*
powerful pokemon

Team Members
Hypershadow189 as spriter, mapper, advance text, and attack maker
Theonewhoisodd as mapper

Jobs
Mapper
Scrpiter
Advance text
tile maker
Trainer editor
Title screen changer
Title screen cry changer
pokedex editor
banner maker

Screnns

Spoiler:

he hypershadow its fun to see one member from on forum on an other

enjoy you guys XD

Well, story seems pointless.
Gl though

why would a window be floating along side of the window

Onto the screenies, Mapping seems simple and has many errors.
Your sea maps have a tree border block??????
Improve your mapping and story.

Your Mapping needs Some Work...I Can see many Errors in those screens...
That story is also pretty weak...with spelling errors such as todidile...

But good luck with this...

Well dude, using to many flowers kind of ruins the map, so maybe you should consider adding it to random spots?
Or maybe just use less...
Second of all, don't spell something with tiles..
Third..Try to make it a little less straight, I think it is to straight and square..
But good luck..Were only asking you if you can improve..Keep at the same pace if you don't want to, at least you will complete a hack (that is if you are willing to)